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2nd May 2013, 5:36 AM

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Bloomer 2nd May 2013, 5:36 AM edit delete

DOUBLE UPDATE! START FROM THE PREVIOUS PAGE. (If that's where you left off of course...)

I AM SOOO SORRY FOR THE HORRIBLY LATE UPDATE GUYS! The day before I finished the previous page my computer decided not to work anymore, I went and got it checked and apparently the motherboard? died and it was going to be veeery expensive to fix it seeing as it was a laptop from 2005, so my dad was nice enough to get me a new computer and a desktop at that! Though it didn't come with a screen so I'm using a small flat screen tv (the screen size is otherworldly).

I'm REAALLY REALLY sorry for the quality of these pages, I am not used to this new screen at all, and it doesn't really help that it makes everything look a whee bit fatter so I keep thinking somethings wrong with my scans. :\
ANYWAYS I finally finished the chapter, on the 13th I'll be heading off to basic/bootcamp and tech. training, but I'll try to let you guys know when the day comes around. I've been doing thumbnails, and writing out the basic layout for the next chapter, but I won't be posting or working on the pages until I get back. What do you guys think I should work on to better the next chapter? Like do I need to work on my pacing? What about my art? I want to hear/read your guys' opinions!
Also, I was thinking about making a tumblr for future comic updates and comic related/miscellaneous art, do you guys think it's a good idea?

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@Ginger Phoenix: Heheh. Thank you for reading thus far! I'm glad you like the page and Julian's expressions. :P If you don't mind me asking, is there anything you'd like to see improve for the next chapter?

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Ginger Phoenix 2nd May 2013, 8:48 PM edit delete reply

Just keep up the good work! Your style and attention to detail is brilliant, my only comment is your first chapter is long but to be honest, I love long stories, so you can get more involved with the characters. I only mention it because other readers might like something a bit more faster paced but I wouldn't take that as a negative comment, just a general observation.

But yay! You finished chapter one, well done! :D

Bloomer 3rd May 2013, 5:12 AM edit delete reply

@Ginger Phoenix: It is a little long, the chapter without the weird, long prologue is 52 pages. That's a long chapter! There's definitely pages or moments that I could have done without. Preferring shorter chapters is very understandable, I sometimes prefer them myself.

Thank you very much for your imput. Now that I'm done with this chapter I can work on making the next one better! :D Whooo! -flails-

Comic 65 - Chapter 1, page 63. -End of chapter

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